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Assassin

legend has it all right about you, down to the last bullet of how you sang through grenades at boulder-lashed, whitewash-loaded rivers dissolving mountains with a charm you merely hinted from summertime abroad quiet while I summon your demons quiet while I load your gun you could have been anyone of us that life but your song had an undertone and boy did you sing it well

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Date: 11/23/2023 2:27:00 PM
As I read your poem I pondered "what makes a person want to be an assassin?" What's the motivation? Yet there are those who readily choose it for whatever reason. I digress. I liked 'your song had an undertone.' Well done, sir, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/23/2023 2:59:00 PM
I had in mind that as well as a person being an assassin, nature and life itself can be the assassin, coming after us from the life choices we make etc. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts Sara

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