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AS YOU LAY

Together hand in hand
By the meadows where we stand

Captured by Gods amazing creations
But you stand the most beautiful of revelations

The birds and the bees 
The sky above tall trees

But mirrored in the still water
I see a humble reflection and nothing else after

Holding gentle hands leading to a rivers bed
On aromatic grass you've softly laid my head

Gazing into your shinny, hungry eyes
For your heart and body, my love silently cries

As you lay your head upon my breast
It's there you must now rest
Whilst I thank God, for I've been blessed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2014 6:45:00 AM
You need to pitch this to publisher this is fantastic work
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Date: 12/11/2013 4:59:00 AM
You really do have powerful imagery in your poetry, coupled by subtle rhyme, that gives over power with the words you use. I have liked everyone I've read so far.
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:24:00 PM
Denise, very nice poem you have here. The passion in your lines are evident. I love romantic poetry as you can probably tell by my inventory of work. Thanks for the stop by and welcome to Poetry Soup! Look forward to reading more of your work. MC
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Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
Date: 11/4/2013 10:14:00 AM
Denise, read as much as you like, I turn no one away LOL! MC
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DENISE NARAYADU
Date: 11/1/2013 12:50:00 PM
Hey Marquis i appreciate your feedback thanks. i have read some of yours as well and have enjoyed it alot. hope to read on more soon.