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Arachnimistakes

each one of my mistakes is a spider in a beautiful purse i carry with me it’s pink as all my mistakes have been so girly. the frenzies of youth left me with many regrets but my mistakes came from who i am those spiders crawled out of my heart the thing about spiders is each one can tell a story, weave a web that shows the design of its soul they weave webs of self-hate, impulsivity, ego, coldness but spiders don’t belong in a bag, and so i say a prayer and leave it in the field to be emptied by the stars and i walk away.

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Date: 7/19/2023 11:25:00 PM
"it’s pink as all my mistakes have been so girly" - so beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/18/2023 8:40:00 AM
what a unique take on the theme Sydney, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sydney Morrison
Date: 7/19/2023 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 7/17/2023 6:51:00 AM
Sydney, a huge CONGRATS on your very well-deserved win with this deeply meaningful, inspirational poem. Janice
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Sydney Morrison
Date: 7/19/2023 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Janice :)
Date: 7/16/2023 9:12:00 PM
Congrats on 2nd place in my contest! I loved your take on the contest...unique! Excellent last 2 lines.
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Sydney Morrison
Date: 7/19/2023 1:47:00 PM
Thank you so much!! It was a great prompt :D
Date: 5/31/2023 5:23:00 PM
With magnificent imagery, a poem compares mistakes to spiders nestled in a lovely handbag. The handbag, tinted in delicate pink, symbolizes the femininity of these errors. Sydney, your thought-provoking poem and uplifting comment on my page are much appreciated. Let us maintain our connection and continue to interact.
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Sydney Morrison
Date: 6/1/2023 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll see you around PoetrySoup! :D

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