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Anticipation (Weaving a Quilt of Spring)

MIRY FIELDS of gold entwining thread lingering.... a soulful wind roams

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:57:00 AM

intriguing ..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 9:09:00 AM

Very pretty! congratulations on your top ten win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Rick. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/18/2010 9:08:00 AM

Congrats on your 9th Place win in the contest, Rick! ...later, Jimmy

Amy Green

Date: 5/18/2010 8:19:00 AM

Another great visual! Congrats!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2010 7:57:00 AM

Congrats Rick on a brilliant winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest ... enjoy another great and well deserved win... TWO SOUP MAILS... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/17/2010 11:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome 9th place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2010 7:49:00 PM

i have not seen this contest, I need to check it out.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 7:32:00 PM

Very nice Rick bur check Chrales's blog tonight as he has some extra guidelines for us to fix our entries... good luck in his contest... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2010 6:06:00 PM

I guess that this is fall....Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2010 3:28:00 PM

I see Kim saw early spring, but the "fields of gold" had me thinking of September. If you read Brian's blog, you'll see that poetry is supposed to leave us guessing. Really enjoyed this "strict haiku" and wish you well in the contest, Rick. Love, Carolyn

Kim M

Date: 5/14/2010 10:37:00 AM

This is a pretty description of the time of year just before spring arrives.