ANOTHER DAY FADES

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ANOTHER DAY FADES the sky at sunset fate rests in another day a time to reflect another day fades we collect all memories moment by moment

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/8/2025 9:09:00 PM

Nice flow to your Senryu, Rose ... have a nice evening. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/8/2025 10:24:00 PM

thanks for your kind words, Bill. Hope all is well with you in Texas

Tom Woody

Date: 6/8/2025 3:10:00 PM

Well I have to say this was one boring Sunday. Wife just had hip replacement surgery so we're stuck inside. Still, she's a cutie. Nice senryus

Yellow Rose
Date: 6/8/2025 4:07:00 PM

sorry to hear of your wife's hip surgery....that's major work and requiring lots of physical therapy and patience. I hope she was given pain killers to ease her discomfort. Bless her heart. Yes, it's boring for the spouse to just sit around and wait. Bless your heart, too. Thanks for reading my end-of-the-day senyrus. Glad you liked them. Wishing you and your wife a pleasant week. 'yellow'