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the sky at sunset fate rests in another day a time to reflect another day fades we collect all memories moment by moment

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/24/2023 9:43:00 AM

One day at a time, Sara. My Queen of Haiku! (deeply bows, are sway from left to right then slowly exit right). Ink Empress was the first to crown you, I'm just following her lead, my fair Queen. Smiles ~ Blessings, you are both to me. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 1:06:00 PM

ahhh...you're compliments overwhelm me, dear hubby. I appreciate the crown you've given me. I'm grateful for you and Ink Impress for the meaningful moniker. hugs, me

Ink Empress

Date: 9/24/2023 4:42:00 AM

Sunsets are my most favorite time of the day, and yes we reflect and enjoy the colors unfurling across skies.. i always say this u are the queen of haiku! Theres always so much depth in your haikus. And i love that! I love “ we collect memories moment by moment” how true. Beautiful!!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, 'Ink,' for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I'm overwhelmed with your beautiful comments and encouraging words. Thank you from the depth of my soul. You're a gem of a person...have a blessed day, Sara

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2023 2:47:00 AM

You really know how to create imagery.. you are so talented with how you do it.. great selection of words from you extensive vocabulary that has brought these haiku to life..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 4:02:00 AM

Wow, thank you for your wonderfully complimentary comments....means a great deal to me. I do love creating imagery...it satisfies my soul. Have a pleasant day! Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/23/2023 9:12:00 PM

'fate rests in another day' really has me thinking... pondering the universe. Thanks, gw

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 4:03:00 AM

thanks, Gershon, for stopping by. I'm grateful the last line grabbed you and has you pondering. Have wonderful day, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 9/23/2023 4:04:00 PM

And each memory has value. Lessons to be learned, both good and bad. As I'm writing this the sun is setting

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 4:22:00 PM

Hi Tom--how appropriate that you're reading my 'fading day' Haiku as the sun is setting. I agree...all memories are valuable. The most delicious ones are the good ones; the challenging ones were insightful ones, especially upon reflection. Enjoy the end of your day, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 9/23/2023 4:04:00 PM

And each memory has value. Lessons to be learned, both good and bad. As I'm writing this the sun is setting

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 4:21:00 PM

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 3:28:00 PM

Lovely haiku perfect form

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, Karen, for stopping by. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my Haiku. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/23/2023 3:27:00 PM

Great set of haikus Sara. You created such a wonderful picture of a fleeting day with your exquisite words

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 4:19:00 PM

thank you, kind Sir. I appreciate you stopping by and commenting. Enjoy your evening, Sara