Angelic

To describe how I feel within this space There is radiance, light is emitted No dread lives here as I gaze at your face Just pure and wholesome thoughts are transmitted There is radiance, light is emitted Within resplendent, transcendent embrace Just pure and wholesome thoughts are transmitted As the celestial path we can now trace Within resplendent, transcendent embrace Paradisiacal, I'm held in love As the celestial path we can now trace No doubt this person was sent from above Paradisiacal, I'm held in love Transfiguration bound with acceptance No doubt this person was sent from above Serene as I vibrate with resonance Transfiguration bound with acceptance No dread lives here as I gaze at your face Serene as I vibrate with resonance To describe how I feel within this space

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Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:38:00 PM

Dilly, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/12/2023 10:54:00 PM

Thank you, much appreciated

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 8/19/2023 8:32:00 AM

You glow girl !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/19/2023 11:23:00 AM

Thanks Vickey - just a contest write x

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/19/2023 5:49:00 AM

Ha you went for angelic Dilly, I chose abandoned, love the descriptive form chosen, continuity rolls off the page effortlessly, great one for contest, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/19/2023 6:16:00 AM

Absolutely trying something new, keeps us fresh!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/19/2023 6:08:00 AM

Thanks David, I thought I could ponder something new :D

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/19/2023 2:53:00 AM

Such a wonderfully woven piece with elegant and whimsical wordplay, along with brilliant rhyming flow, I'm awestruck! This embalmed my heart with an iridescent aura..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/19/2023 3:00:00 AM

Thank you for your kind feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)