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ANATH loka mhanatat mi ahe anath anath mhanje kai re deva navin kapde ka tya mulana fakt zune ka amhala vadhdivas tya mulancha hoto motha sajara vadhdivas kadhi ahe hech nahi mahit mala loka mhantat mi ahe anath anath mhanje kai re deva anath mhanje aai baba naslela asa kaal sangitle teacher ni mala mi vichrla tyana kuthe bhettat aai baba tya hasun mhantlya fakt devach devu shakto aai baba loka mhantat mi ahe anath anath mhanje kai re deva deva tuch sarvana dile na aai baba mag mi kasa dislo nahi re tula ashi konti mothi chuk mi keli ki tu mala evdhi mothi shiksha dilis loka mhantat mi ahe anath anath mhanje kai re deva mala pan de na re aai baba changla vaglo tar shabaski dhyala ani vait vaglo ki ordayla ekta ahe re mi khup deva konala tari pathav mala sambhalayla loka mhantat mi ahe anath anath mhanje kai re deva vachan deto mi tula nahi dhukavanar kadhi aai babana motha hoin naav kamvin anadat thevin aai babana pan please de na re mazhya aai babana loka mhantat mi ahe anath anath mhanje kai re deva

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Date: 2/21/2016 6:11:00 PM
enjoyed this one again. :)
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:10:00 PM
snehal salunkhe, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/28/2015 11:29:00 PM
Hi SNEHAL.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 7/25/2015 3:00:00 PM
Snehal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2015 2:59:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Snehal. Enjoy your stay with us. Regards, Viv
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