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The pond is the finest of mirrors, never showing exactly what is above, but converting it to a image so beautifully smudged and broken. The weeping willow, the soft clouds above, all become a Monet painting – all free for the looking. I can walk here every day and it will always be both the same but different. This transience, the changing by the hour, by the day, by the season, makes it precious. I walk along the pond’s edges under the puffs of my own breath, taking in the denuded trees and the stark freshness that only the coldest season can bring. A small bird in a bold cap of golden feathers disturbs the silence. It alights upon a nearby twig, fluttering its wings, each beat forming a sonnet to the air. The water is a clear, movie-star blue, the kind of blue their eyes are.
crystal clear water reflecting a world beyond pond holds earth's secrets bright blue sky above cotton clouds float by in peace see nature’s canvas trees in winter’s hold nature’s beauty unadorned aesthetic stillness

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Date: 11/28/2023 9:16:00 PM
"It alights upon a nearby twig, fluttering its wings, each beat forming a sonnet to the air.".... How lively is this image..... so vibrant with life. Let me repeat again and again, I love your haibuns. This walk along the water's edge watching the reflections of trees and clouds in it, I am sure, is so enjoyable. You are able to transfer that joy to the readers too !
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:48:00 AM
thank you, kind Valsa, for journeying with me along the water's edge. I'm grateful you appreciated the poetic walk and hopefully felt some peace & joy. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 3:19:00 PM
I absolutely love the images of how your portrayed your pond, "like a Monet painting" just beautiful...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 3:21:00 PM
thank you, Paige, for your visit and your wonderful comments. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 1:35:00 PM
Dear Sara, your impeccable portrayal of the enchanting allure that graces the shores is truly remarkable. The delicate tapestry of imagery woven within these lines evokes a profound connection with the natural world, a testament to a soul fervently enamored with its exquisite splendor.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 3:08:00 PM
dearest Sotto...I'm grateful for your splendid and gracious words. I'm glad you appreciate the 'tapestry of imagery' as well as the connection with nature. You're right, I am a bit enamored with nature's beauty. I do so appreciate your thoughtful words and support. Have a great day, your poetess friend in Texas
Date: 11/27/2023 12:52:00 PM
An amazing write sweet Sara full of such beauty and imagery! You are a very talented lady….Debx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 PM
Wow, Deb...thank you for your rousing comments and compliments. I'm grateful for your appreciation of my poetic words. Hope you are well...enjoy your week, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 12:49:00 PM
You have been inspired by this painting and this haibun is a fave for me.. I just love the imagery you have created here and so many wonderful verses in your praise followed by three excellent haiku which have their own vivid imagery... you have such a wonderful way with word.. so poetic and delicate...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 PM
your words and compliments humble me, Silent One. I'm grateful you loved the imagery in the three separate verses. I'm delighted you found my words poetic and delicate. Means a lot that you faved this poem. My heart is grateful...have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 9:52:00 AM
A FAV for you beautiful Haibun, Sara. I know they won't let us FAV each other's poems, but it still deserves a FAV! Lovely three verses of Haiku. The Monet was a special treat. Thanks for sharing your gifts of writing with us. A poet friend in Texas (down the hall) Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 3:34:00 PM
awww...you're such a delightful and kind hubby. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and for commenting on my poetry...du bist der Beste, me
Date: 11/27/2023 5:33:00 AM
You captured the beauty along the water's edge splendidly, Sara. Lovely imagery that brings forth the scenes.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 5:42:00 AM
thank you for your kind and gracious words, Vijay! I'm grateful you were caught up in the sensations that the imagery created. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 4:53:00 AM
Words from a soul deeply in love with nature and its beauty...moving. Enjoyed accompanying you along the pond's edge. Paul
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 5:43:00 AM
Thanks, Paul, for joining me for an adventure along the pond's edge. I'm grateful you found my poem meaningful. I appreciate you and your visits. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 4:45:00 AM
Sara, your poem is a beautiful ode to the ever-changing beauty of nature. Your vivid descriptions and the serene haikus create captivating imagery that transports the reader to the tranquil setting of the pond. Like Walden's Pond! Well done! - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 5:44:00 AM
oh, wow, Daniel...humble gratitude and thanks for your comparing my description to that of Thoreau's 'Walden Pond,' truly one of my all-time favorite reads. I'm grateful my words were captivating and you were transported along with me! Much appreciate your complimentary words. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 4:44:00 AM
so beautiful. peace, grace, a muse that favors the soul and whispers light to the moments spent there at the edge of this water... i love this. God bless you, love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 5:45:00 AM
aww, Gina, your words are so thoughtful and kind, filled with the light that's in your poetic spirit. Thanks for your visit and have a great day, blessings, Sara

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