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Just days ago golden grasses waved in the stronger breeze of late summer, a preview of the autumn winds to come. The clover and alfalfa were beginning to bloom, sending a heady scent over the nearby country road and our tiny subdivision just beyond the ridge. But then the grass became hay--golden and dry--and the strands stirring only when a strong gust accelerated over the newly sawn fields. Today, the baler came and formed the crop into a hundred hay bales or more. Now I gaze across the fields and imagine myself climbing over the five-bar gate and sitting upon one of the bales remembering you and the time we spent together.
I shall miss thy gentle grace, your soft breezes and tranquil face. no other season can fill thy place. you lifted up my spirits with your wonderous blue skies. you always listened to my silent cries. you answered me with soft winds and whispering sighs. you decorated my days with colors galore. "stay with me a while,” you always implored. there’s simply no season I do more adore. you taught me to appreciate the beauty in being enough. yes, the months between us will be rough. though I’ll miss you, know I’m no creampuff. Adieu! Autumn Adieu! We’ll be together again soon.

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Date: 12/29/2023 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A lovely write/picture. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/29/2023 4:28:00 PM
thank you, Paula, for your visit and for your congratulatory words...I'm pretty thrilled about it. Have a Happy New Year, Sara
Date: 11/10/2023 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/29/2023 5:55:00 AM
thanks...just now seeing your comment. sorry
Date: 11/5/2023 3:04:00 AM
Sara, this is amazing and so skillfully written. Sorry that I missed this on POTD. So, my belated congratulations to you for that. Thank you for your recent visits dear friend. Hugs Charlie
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/10/2023 1:28:00 PM
thank you, Charles, for your encouraging and uplifting comments. I appreciate your congratulatory wishes and for your continued visits. Enjoy your day, hugs back, Sara
Date: 11/3/2023 9:41:00 AM
Back with belated hearty congratulations on a well-deserved POTD, dear Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/3/2023 1:46:00 PM
thanks, dearest Sotto. I appreciate your heartfelt congratulatory words. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 11/2/2023 7:44:00 AM
Just beautiful and mesmerizing dear Sara . I was carried away by the rhythm and flow and emotions you have woven so skillfully . A belated congratulations on your POTD. So much serenity here . Hugs to you , Susan :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/2/2023 9:12:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Susan, and for your kind and complimentary words. I appreciate your thoughtfulness. Hugs, and have a pleasant day, Sara :-)
Date: 11/2/2023 2:59:00 AM
What a beautiful poem to express your love and appreciation of your favourite season. Mine too. A bit late in congratulating you Sara. An excellent choice for POTD...Hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/2/2023 4:15:00 AM
thank you, Maria, for stopping by and for your kind and complimentary words. You lifted my heart this morning, thanks so much, Sara
Date: 11/2/2023 12:06:00 AM
Amazing writing - on my favorite season. Love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you always, much love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/2/2023 4:16:00 AM
thanks for your complimentary words and for sharing love for the autumn season. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 11:35:00 PM
Perfect prose and poetry worthy of a POTD. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:17:00 AM
thank you, Victor, for stopping by and reading this poem. I appreciate your compliments and kind words. have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 7:57:00 PM
Oh wow ~ straight from the heart! Enjoyed every line! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/2/2023 4:18:00 AM
thanks, Unseeking, for your visit and your enthusiastic comments and congratulatory words. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 6:45:00 PM
Dear Sara, this thought highlights there entire poem for me. "you taught me to appreciate." With every moment, month and season, I am thankful. You express your love for Autumn, so beautifully. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/2/2023 4:19:00 AM
thank you, Brandy, for your visit. I'm grateful that my thoughts softly caressed you and your heart...such a poetic and beautiful phrase. Thanks for your kindness. Have a blessed day, hugs back at you :-) Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 3:04:00 PM
A very moving tribute to autumn , capturing that feeling of a profound sadness at the centre of all things beautiful, the realisation of its passing and having to let go. Congratulations Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 3:58:00 PM
thanks, Paul, for stopping by, I appreciate your thoughtful comments and congratulatory words, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 2:22:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Sara :) - hugs
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Date: 11/1/2023 3:59:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise. I appreciate the visit and the hugs, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 2:20:00 PM
Sara, your poem is beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 3:59:00 PM
thank you, Constance, for stopping by, I appreciate your comments and congratulatory message. have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 1:59:00 PM
Yay….Well done Sara and well deserved…Congratulations on POTD! Debx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 4:00:00 PM
thank you so much, Ms. Deb! enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD on this lovely write.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 4:00:00 PM
thank you, dear Eve. Have a lovely evening, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 10:32:00 AM
This is lovely! Thoroughly engaging, beautiful, replete with a giggle. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 4:01:00 PM
thank you, Maureen, for your kind words and congratulatory comment. I'm grateful you appreciated the humor at the end, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD :)
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Date: 11/1/2023 4:01:00 PM
thank you, Di11y! appreciate it
Date: 11/1/2023 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Sara Etgen Baker! We put summer to rest, now Adieu to autumn. We embrace anew. Intimate tribute to a season's consciousness, a touch of humor saved for last. Enjoy your day! xhugs ~Anaya
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 4:02:00 PM
thanks, Anaya, for your visit and for your kind words. Yes, we're always letting go and embracing the new. I'm glad you appreciate the 'consciousness' of my poem and the humor. Have a wonderful evening, Sara xx
Date: 11/1/2023 9:37:00 AM
I love it, would have FAVed it if I could. I know you will miss autumn, Sara. And winter will be tough, but you're no creampuff. :-) Congratulations on your POTD! Hooray! Enjoy your special day! Your Westside Writing Bear, Bill
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Date: 11/2/2023 12:22:00 AM
You two are just adorable! Eastside Westside, all around Texas. ;-)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 4:03:00 PM
thanks dear hubby for your congratulatory comments. If anyone know I'm no cream puff, it's you. Thanks for taking me to lunch on my special day, hugs from Eastside Writing Bear, me
Date: 11/1/2023 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Poetess, on your lovely POTD! Autumn is a gorgeous season, and you have paid a sweet tribute to such an exquisite season with stunning visuals. Love ~ Mala
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 9:02:00 AM
thank you Mala, for kind comments. I agree...autumn is gorgeous. Have a splendid day! Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Yes, we must say good bye for now. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 9:02:00 AM
thank you sweet Paula for your thoughtful comments. Wishing you a blessed day as well, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 6:35:00 AM
Lovely writing dear Sara! I really enjoyed reading this romantic Autumn poem! Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 9:04:00 AM
thank you for your enthusiastic comments and congratulatory wishes, Ms. Linda. I appreciate you! Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 6:16:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Sara. Enjoy your special day today.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 9:04:00 AM
thank you, Vijay, for your congratulatory words. Will enjoy my day...dinner out with hubby. Have a pleasant Wednesday, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 6:13:00 AM
a lovely composition -
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 9:05:00 AM
thank you, Mat! I appreciate your visit, Sara
Date: 11/1/2023 6:05:00 AM
A lovely tribute to Autumn, Congrats on POTD
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/1/2023 9:05:00 AM
thank you, Joseph, for your congratulatory wishes. Have a splendid day, Sara
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