A Storm Is Coming

dark clouds are forming a smell of rain in the air calm before the storm

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 6/18/2022 11:02:00 AM

Quite literally there a storm is coming!

Bill Baker
Date: 6/18/2022 1:38:00 PM

Thanks, Miranda. :-) Bill

Spirit Cook

Date: 6/9/2022 4:06:00 AM

I get the sense of time...time running out...time that must be carefully utilised because there is so little of it. And choice...choosing what to do during the limited time. Frugality. Making the best use of your resources during the limited time. But realising the the sun will come out again. Hopeful hugs

Bill Baker
Date: 6/9/2022 7:44:00 AM

I like the way you think, Spirit Cook. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry. I'm following your poetry also. Hugs, Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2022 2:05:00 PM

It's a term i often use when things go far too smoothly for too long, call me superstitious. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/24/2022 11:25:00 AM

Yep, calm before the storm, can be quite useful. :-) Blessings my friend, Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/23/2022 3:35:00 AM

Good Morning Bill - There is always imagery before the storm as in your entry which is true to the format voice and tone. Truly. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Enjoy the weekend and poetrysoup too. Take care

Bill Baker
Date: 4/24/2022 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, Lisa. Take care, Bill

Deb M

Date: 4/21/2022 8:36:00 PM

I love that time right before a storm hits….the excitement knowing it’s on its way(love a good storm)Described beautifully with few words by you “Bear Hugs Bill” Debx

Bill Baker
Date: 4/22/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thanks, Deb, I enjoy the rumbling and rain. The smell is pleasing and the sound of rain hitting the windowpanes is music to my ears. A Big Bear hug for you. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill