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A Mouse And A Man

In the anters and shadows of this baleful life
perhaps the little brown mouse searching in silence
bewray a lonesome story behold

For eyes to wander a brief candle behold
in hushed light, enwheeled...this pitiful life
if only, my friend, to peer in silence

where love had flown in years of silence
to gape for dawn, a friendship behold
in ghostly thought of scurried life

From the cold reality of life where painful silence smothers, Behold!! compassion is born..



Anters - Caves
Brief Candle- Life is compared to a candle flame
Enwheeled- Encompassed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 3/12/2013 7:39:00 AM
congrats on ur win!!
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:36:00 PM
RICK, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Rick. Nice poem. Cheers! Maria
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:37:00 AM
Rick, congrats on your win....David
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win !Beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations in my contest,Rick. I admire the way you did definitions for us of these eloquent words! Bewray was certainly a new one for me!!
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:49:00 PM
Seems many people live this way if I got this..... I liked it
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