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a lady aurum

Facing the idolum of near successive picture perfection I sat looking at her in all earthly wide wonder All that I had heard of her became much clear I kept thanking the happy chance for such lucky reflection. Gentle grace, lucid charm, distinct person full of pristine vision Setting forth moral marks by austerity, halting others in fear Her very presence makes the stigma go down with unseen shudder She is, but a lady aurum with no substitution. Keep going, for we know not others with better honesty Living with cogitate morality you are content and at ease You aspire, for tranquil world hoping this chaos to cease. Doing your devoted prophetic work to the good of humanity Your propitious thoughts will frame the system with prosperity I hence wish this, may your good tribes ever increase.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 12/8/2014 7:00:00 PM
Hey Thriveni.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:33:00 PM
Hi Thriveni, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:13:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Thriveni - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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