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A Hollow Heart's Desire

Blades shooting out from the ground, Petals floating all around, Feathers drifting across the sky, How it hurts me to wave goodbye. A ball of joy, Replaced by a decoy, The sky crying. No point lying. Colour chart, Dagger to the heart, Shrivelled and drooped, Standing there, stooped. Hastily moving like a cheetah, Not seeing where we are, Black cave, Our love engraved. Seeing you, heart as light as a dove, Exciting like a golden retriever’s love, Tunnel to somewhere, Ready and prepared. Credit to: Fire Bird

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Date: 9/25/2023 2:57:00 PM
Hey nice write WM. Welcome to PS. How are you and fire bird related?
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2023 3:58:00 PM
Well we're glad your both here
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Fire Bird
Date: 9/25/2023 3:03:00 PM
hahaha, sorry Writing Muse, should have said great friends!! - Phoenix :)))
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Writing Muse
Date: 9/25/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thank you for asking! We are great friends and she actually got me onto this website, I could not not be more grateful
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Fire Bird
Date: 9/25/2023 3:02:00 PM
We are just friends; we go to the same high school!! - Phoenix :))
Date: 9/24/2023 11:27:00 PM
Thank you for posting this poem!! It's amazing and I really enjoy creating poems with you! Kepp up the amazing poem writing! - Phoenix :)
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Writing Muse
Date: 9/24/2023 11:30:00 PM
you are so creative, it was exceptional creating this with you!!

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