A Giraffe That Once Swallowed A Ladder

A giraffe that once swallowed a ladder Said 'I'm feeling decidedly sadder. For the top of the rung Is caught on my tongue And the bottom one's touching my bladder'.

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/28/2017 7:47:00 AM

Very innovative limerick, Ray. My compliments!

Justin Clason

Date: 8/27/2017 10:28:00 AM

This was really good, gave me a chuckle.

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2017 7:58:00 AM

lol....Thanks for the laughs Ray

lim'rik flats

Date: 6/18/2017 7:13:00 PM

Oooooh....Xtremely great lim'rik! Seven thumbs up and a caramel chew. Classic lim'rickery indeed! ~j

cheryl hoffman

Date: 3/2/2017 9:27:00 AM

Another humorous gem Ray, lol!~Che :)

Ray Gridley
Date: 3/3/2017 5:11:00 AM

Thanks Che!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/1/2017 5:38:00 PM

Very funny Ray lol :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/31/2017 1:08:00 PM

Great limerick, Ray. Very funny!

JAN ALLISON

Date: 1/31/2017 9:54:00 AM

ha ha ha great one Ray:-) hugs Jan xx