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Young Love

* Oxytocin pours: illusion of heart is it real or not how long will it last perhaps forever? susceptible to anguish now likely to hurt; his heart frozen dare she leave dare she stay dare she love one thing matters: hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 2:30:00 AM
I put it as my favourite poem, but did not give it a comment! so now just to let you know, how much i value this. . . . 7 that's how high they got !
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:21:00 AM
Beautiful work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/30/2013 11:54:00 PM
Very beautiful poem!!!!!
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Date: 6/30/2013 4:24:00 AM
A very lovely piece. I enjoyed reading this great work of yours. Well done. AO
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:45:00 PM
yes only one thing matters............ never give up.............. young love, is only the beginning... and i imagine you are young..... luv~ SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:27:00 AM
This is lovely! The language, the form - and that last word is the perfect ending. Great job!
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:19:00 PM
Wow, the message you pour out with this write is truly fascinating my friend! I surely loved reading this incredible poem this evening! You always impress me with you amazing poetry Dana'lynn! What a tremendous piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/26/2013 6:02:00 PM
Ps., Your Beauty, Belongs Within My Heart's Favourites.
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Date: 6/26/2013 6:00:00 PM
` Without Hope What Do We Have Beyound As Within, This Life Sweet Beautiful Precious Dana'lynn ~ 'Young Love,' Tis a Very Beautiful Painting ~ Love, John
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