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Who Is the Fool

You will not see my misty eyes gazing down on the road as I leave the car, throbbing. Like a fool of a cursed world, our last night of autumn shivering would not hold me here, torpid in your arms, unable to resist sharp nails of discord you had placed precisely through mocked words, certain of my fall. Like a fool, I mask this wounded pride from sight, yet once the dust settles anew, upon your rage and empty heart, torn leaves bleed away to follow me, yet you will wonder who is the fool, the fool, when the crimson light streaks across the sky. Lady, it is mine, as you tumble alone in the cold--- acting like the real fool, afraid of love's road trip. For Rob Carmack---Lyrics II - The Black Crowes --Poem based on the lyrics, ' Descending' June 2, 2016

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Date: 6/15/2016 9:15:00 AM
ohh, you are on a roll, franco... congrats big time!..hugggs
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Date: 6/13/2016 6:55:00 AM
Greetings Franco. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/11/2016 5:53:00 PM
Well e pressed, congrats on your top placement.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2016 5:54:00 PM
I many impressed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2016 5:54:00 PM
Sorry I meant impressed. My keyboard is doing wierd things.
Date: 6/11/2016 1:39:00 PM
I love this poem, congrats.
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Date: 6/9/2016 11:19:00 PM
well done, Franco...SKAT
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