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White Phone/White Rat

Ran into the house in a hurry my glasses fell off all was blurry I lunged for the phone my pet rat let out a groan poor thing ran off in a scurry Contest~Best Limerick

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Virginia Mitchell

Date: 8/5/2010 3:11:00 AM

Lol! Funny!This is something that could happen to me-IF I had a white rat:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/2/2010 10:55:00 PM

so you like the little white mousies...purrrrrrr ;) :P puuuurrrrrrrr congrad's on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2010 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your win ^Rick in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2010 7:59:00 AM

haha I think I would have made the same mistake--enjoyed this one! Congrats on your best win, Rick ^_^ -- nikko :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/1/2010 1:20:00 PM

Congrats, Rick. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2010 11:52:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your winning poem in the Limeerick contest with this unique write ...awesome win..my friend.. enjoy on this happy Sunday... with luv..

James Fraser

Date: 8/1/2010 4:45:00 AM

Nice one Rick, golly I hope you got your rat back. Congrats on your win in John's contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2010 11:19:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your best limerick category, very good witt. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2010 1:53:00 PM

Those necessary glasses are not the thing to loose..Wonder did you save your pet from getting lost in the wide world of freedom..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/30/2010 6:49:00 PM

Super funny Rick .. good luck in the contest.. should do very well my friend.. enjoyed and thankxxx for appreciating my sense of humor too.. having had four sons all little all at once... it was much amplified crying..haha.. with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/30/2010 6:16:00 PM

cute one

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/30/2010 5:41:00 PM

funny, I enjoyed reading today!! chuckles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2010 5:27:00 PM

I would have screamed my lungs out lol,, funny write. . . enjoyed...P.D.