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When Conscience Is Ignored

He said those words, “I love you.” 
   In your heart you know he really means,
       “I love myself, and I’m going to use you.”
                                       I tried to tell you, 
               not to hurt you, but to help you.
           Refusing to listen, you stopped 
   your ears and gave me a hard shove.
 Now you’ve become a statistic 
as tears flow from 
         your eyes - another teenage girl, 
               unprepared for 


submitted for Standard Contest 180 sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 2/25/2019 11:21:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Carol.
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Date: 2/20/2019 9:10:00 PM
Whoa! Potent penning here, Carol. And couldn't agree with you more: This is so often how teenage pregnancies 'happen.' Kudos. ~ Gershon
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Carol Connell
Date: 2/20/2019 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! Things just do not turn out well when we violate our God given Conscience.
Date: 2/18/2019 8:58:00 PM
I keep saying "follow your heart, follow your heart." I believe you are correct. The heart knows....
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Carol Connell
Date: 2/18/2019 9:11:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comments, Karen. Our heart can be a tricky thing. In this case, the girl should have followed what she knew in her heart. Just for example though, if someone feels in their heart an attraction to a married person, which they know in their mind is wrong, but they go and commit the adultery, then they have done wrong in following their heart. Hope this makes sense.
Date: 2/18/2019 12:19:00 PM
If things sound too be good to be true, they usually are and someone is left to pick up the pieces. A good warning in your words Carol.
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Carol Connell
Date: 2/18/2019 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. I pray there will be more that will heed the warning.
Date: 2/18/2019 11:47:00 AM
Ouch. A poignant poem, Carol. Well penned.
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Carol Connell
Date: 2/18/2019 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Unfortunately, it’s a scenario that happens all too often.