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Thunderstorms of Love

lighting love laces my midnight heart in shadows your potent presence melts my murk madness my soul lives behind the moon your sunset smile awakens me now seeps into my chaos clouds thunder silencing we dance in rogue rain droplets of dreamy dew splash upon our steamed souls August 30th 2020 POTD September 1st 2020

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Date: 1/16/2021 11:52:00 AM
Congrats on having this poem recognized with POTD as well as being published in the 2020 PS Anthology. Well done, Chantelle.
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Date: 9/24/2020 8:58:00 PM
I love this write, and so does the Universe. I'll be looking forward to seeing more. Love, Angela
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Date: 9/16/2020 12:30:00 PM
Chantelle - this is a beautiful poem so much emotion, congratulations on your win David
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/16/2020 12:38:00 PM
Hello David! Thank you for your kind commentary. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/12/2020 3:01:00 AM
I loved the complete poem dear Chantelle. "awakens me now seeps into my chaos clouds thunder silencing" The above lines were my favorite. Your words meaningful and understood. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/12/2020 10:39:00 AM
Hello John! Thank you for your inspiring commentary. I appreciate you stopping by. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/11/2020 6:44:00 AM
Great images....love the dance in the rogue rain. Congratulations on your 1st place Chantelle.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/11/2020 10:43:00 AM
Hello Jeanne! Thank you for your lovely feedback. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/8/2020 7:08:00 PM
Congrats Chantelle on your potd, this is a worthy candidate. Enjoyed this it's a different style from your normal offerings!
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/11/2020 10:41:00 AM
Hello John! Thank you for your incredible commentary. Yes a different style for me...itnis fun to explore all the poetic styles. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/6/2020 8:11:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Chantelle. Belated congrats on POTD. Dreamy dew and derring-do, Gershon
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/11/2020 10:37:00 AM
Hello Gershon! I love your feedback. So much fun to read your signing off lines. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/4/2020 3:19:00 AM
The poetry was amazing. I felt the energy and the drive in the words. "awakens me now seeps into my chaos clouds thunder silencing" I liked the above lines. A wonderful and meaningful poem.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/11/2020 10:34:00 AM
Hello John! My goodness I'm am blushing from your kind commentary. Thank you so very much! Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/2/2020 2:50:00 PM
A delightful string of senryu served with a helping of alliteration, Chantelle. Well done! a fav for me! Hugs // paul
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/11/2020 10:30:00 AM
Hello Paul! Wow! Thank you for your generous commentary and a Fave too! I'm honored. Thank you. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/2/2020 2:40:00 PM
Belated congrats on poem of the day, Chantelle--lovely linked senryu poem.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/11/2020 10:27:00 AM
Hello Vijay! Thank you for your kind words. Chantelle hugs
Date: 9/2/2020 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations your p.o.t.d win. Your pen was writing beauty and love. Enjoy your win and day................
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/2/2020 9:15:00 AM
Hello Paula! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Enjoy your day! Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/2/2020 7:09:00 AM
This is lovely, love the last stanza.. Congrats on POTD.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/2/2020 7:21:00 AM
Hello Silent One! Always a joy to hear from you. Thank you for your inspiring feedback. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/2/2020 2:50:00 AM
- Congratulations so much on yours p.o.t.d. Chantelle Anne :) - I think this page goes a bit in "spin" ... it was not this poem that I saw yesterday .... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/2/2020 7:19:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise! Thank you for your kind commentary. That is interesting about the poems....thank you for sharing. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/2/2020 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Chantelle. This is extraordinary and soothing. Much love :)
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/2/2020 7:17:00 AM
Hello Aditi! Thank you for your incredible feedback. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Chantelle. Must have been one helluva storm:)
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/2/2020 7:16:00 AM
Hello Daniel! Yes it sure was a storm of love and endurance. Thank you for your kind commentary. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 5:11:00 PM
I love everything about this. Rain is very inspiring to me, even a thunderstorm creates such a breathtaking mood. "my soul lives behind the moon, your sunset smile" Such a beautiful thought. Tender and romantic. Congratulations Chantelle, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 5:18:00 PM
Hello Brandy! Thank you so much for your inspiring commentary! We live the Northwest and what a thrill to dance in the rain barefoot with our loved one! Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 4:47:00 PM
Beautifully romantic, congratulations on POTD Chantelle!
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 5:19:00 PM
Oops! Sorry I must have hit the wrong box...Hello Tania! Thank you for your kind commentary. Chantelle hugs xx
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 4:48:00 PM
Hello Constance! Thank you for your kind commentary. A Fave! I'm deeply honored. Thank you again. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 4:46:00 PM
Chantelle, wow, what a lovely poem and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day, enjoy the honor, a FAV for me _Constance
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 5:22:00 PM
Hello Constance! I accidentally got mixed up in replies. Thank you so much for your incredible commentary. A Fave! Im deeply honored. Thank you again. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 4:19:00 PM
Excellent string of senryu, Chantelle! What a joy to read this today. Love your carefully crafted alliterative word duets and trios: "lighting love laces", "potent presence", "melts my murk madness", "sunset smile", "chaos clouds", "droplets of dreamy dew", and "steamed souls". Pure delight, and well worthy of POTD today. Keep writing and inspiring, my dear friend! Hugs ~ John
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 4:31:00 PM
Hello John! Wow! Thank you for your incredible commentary! I love alliteration. This was a joy to write. Thank you again. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 3:55:00 PM
oohhh, I love how each one dissolves romantically into the other. VERY nice entry for that contest.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 4:14:00 PM
Hello Andrea! Thank you for your lovely commentary. I appreciate you dear friend! Love Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 3:32:00 PM
Wow...Love how you expressed yourself here...you're probably not far from the truth...Congratulations Chantelle Anne Cooke on POTD...
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 3:34:00 PM
Hello Arturo! Thank you so very much for your kind commentary. This is based on our 6 year anniversary with David!
Date: 9/1/2020 2:14:00 PM
Love it! Great work Chantelle!! Congratulations on potd
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 2:46:00 PM
Hello Mark! Thank you very much! Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 11:07:00 AM
Hello Chantelle, As I read this poem I can vision the couple dancing in the rain. So romantic. Hugs Darlene. xxxx-oooo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2020 3:45:00 PM
Hello Chantelle, I like to walk in the rain. You know i can see myself dancing in the rain. Hugs Darlene xx
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 11:28:00 AM
Hello Darlene! Thank you so much for your endearing comments. In the Northwest it's a joy to dance in the rain! Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 9/1/2020 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Chantelle. Singing and dancing in the rain of romance. This is definitely NOT all wet! Prayers and blessings to you.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 9:53:00 AM
Hello Sam! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Chantelle hugs xx Prayers and blessings to you.
Date: 9/1/2020 7:14:00 AM
I absolutely love this wonderful creation. Final stanza is pure gold!! Congratulations on this gem being awarded POTD honors my friend.. A fav... God bless..
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 9/1/2020 8:27:00 AM
Hello Robert! Wow! Thank you for your beautiful commentary and a Fave! I'm deeply honored! God bless you. Chantelle hugs xx
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