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The Widow

The Widow By Valerie D. Staton Melancholy face Mascara stained tears fall Home Going Service Subtle breeze sauntered Through bedroom window and kissed Widow’s somber face Smell of Lagerfeld On decedent’s robe brought peace To her wearied soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/30/2019 4:18:00 PM
This reminds me of my mother, after my father died. Now she too is gone. Beautiful poem. :)
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/30/2019 6:05:00 PM
May their souls rest in eternal peace. Thank you for reading my poem and finding it favorable.
Date: 1/28/2019 8:23:00 AM
What a well-conceived, excellently written string of haiku! Brilliant! Hugs. Pandita
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/28/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/28/2019 2:46:00 AM
Grief well expressed... :)
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/28/2019 6:25:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/27/2019 5:37:00 PM
Hello Valerie, Very Well-Done!! Sad, powerful, and most descriptive!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/28/2019 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Gary!
Date: 1/27/2019 4:13:00 PM
I really loved the middle part with the sauntering breeze. Cool imagery!
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/28/2019 6:26:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 1/27/2019 2:36:00 PM
A striking and expressive string of haiku/senryu, Valerie. Well done! Regards // paul
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/28/2019 6:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 1/27/2019 12:10:00 PM
Valarie, sad but beautifully penned ~
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/28/2019 6:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 1/27/2019 7:58:00 AM
Very nice Valerie, well done my friend
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/27/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 1/27/2019 5:38:00 AM
I absolutely love this. Well written! :)
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/27/2019 5:50:00 AM
Thanks Heidi!