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The Table Next to Mine

At a corner table in the morning haze, Steam rose from cups in softened glaze. A couple sat — greyed by time’s hand, But something cracked beneath the bland. He flipped the menu like a sacred test, Each word a blur on a burdened chest. But hunger wasn’t what he fought — It was battles that the world forgot. A waiter came, displaced his bottle, A tiny act — yet struck full throttle. His jaw clenched tight, a silent spark, A flash of storm beneath the stark. Her silence was soft, like waiting rain, She watched him fidget, hide the pain. No sighs were shared, no fingers touched, Just echoes of a bond, once clutched. Where were the children? Grown and gone? Or had the world just moved along? Perhaps a son who never calls, Or photos hung in distant halls. The food arrived — just dal and rice, No garnish dressed, no extra spice. They ate like clockwork, slow and neat, As if the day could still repeat. I watched, unknown, a fleeting guest, At someone else's lifelong test. And left with thoughts I couldn’t shake — Of love, of time, of hearts that break. -Saankhya Tare

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Date: 7/28/2025 6:32:00 AM
Very poignant piece of poetry. An astute observation...but one you will, if not already, come to more understand. Time changes everything...eventually. Enjoyed! :) john
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Saankhya Tare
Date: 7/28/2025 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. Your words truly mean a lot—especially coming from someone who could feel the weight of what I tried to express. I'm just 18, still learning, still observing, and I know time will deepen my understanding in ways I can't yet imagine. Grateful you took the time to read and reflect. :)
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Saankhya Tare
Date: 7/28/2025 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. Your words truly mean a lot—especially coming from someone who could feel the weight of what I tried to express. I'm just 18, still learning, still observing, and I know time will deepen my understanding in ways I can't yet imagine. Grateful you took the time to read and reflect. :)

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