The Sun vs The Sunset
The sunset, with hues rich and deep,
Said, "My beauty, the world's bound to keep!"
But the sun, with a wink,
Said, "You're just a quick blink,
While I'm shining, the world's wide awake, asleep!"
©bfa032225
Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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