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The Slippers

With foggy mind and matted hair My feet adorned the holiday pair. One red, one green at Christmas time when eventually, I'd lose... my mind. I wish I could make Some sense of it all I shuffled along Down the dimly lit hall. The loss in my spirit The pain in my heart, I loved you my friend ... til death due us part. I'll miss how you smiled With bright, white teeth Laughing along in this world Great joy to those you meet. But today I will say my last good-bye, Until we meet again that twinkle in your eye. Now I'll gather my thoughts Ask my mind to clear I'll never forget how You died that year. Then removing the slippers walking straight out the door Good-bye my friend May our sorrow be no more. Copyright © Kelly Besaw Gallo | Year Posted 2022 (Dedicated to Lisa)

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Date: 2/20/2022 6:29:00 PM
A lovely, heart touching poem. Love the rhythm.
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 2/20/2022 8:29:00 PM
Thanks again, Milton, for your comments. I write a lot of poetry that is rhythmic ...almost like you could sing it! Another one you may like is "His Twinkling Star". It's about my adopted mother. One of my favorites! Thanks again.
Date: 2/16/2022 6:16:00 AM
Great dedication, a detailed poem that full of imagery ...
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 2/17/2022 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. I appreciate your feedback. I see you have a great collection. Will take the time to read yours as well.
Date: 2/16/2022 6:16:00 AM
Great dedication, a detailed poem that full of imagery ...
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 3/9/2023 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Silent One! I love good feedback. I try to write painting a picture in one’s mind. ~ Kelly

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