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The Roses Collab

Memories unlock upon sight of rose To long gone gardens, when my love still grows I am still a child, carefree, unjaded Memories that are pure and unfaded Within those gardens my people still dwell Those I long to hold once again and tell That I love them and hold them in my heart Memories live on, though we are apart RhymeZone.com Howmanysyllables.com 10 Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest Rhyme Scheme AABB CCDD Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

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Suzette Richards

Date: 3/28/2023 3:55:00 AM

It is a brilliant poignant piece, DD. :))

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/28/2023 4:10:00 AM

Often the edges of photos hold more intense memories.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/28/2023 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, it's a theme I revisit. The idea of going back to a nondescript day where everyone is correctly placed from in your minds eye. The days that nobody realises are the most memorable

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/24/2023 7:55:00 PM

A lovely start to a beautiful 4 stanza treasure. I am sure Jo will welcome finishing this one DD. Well done.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/24/2023 11:00:00 PM

Thanks Wen, it's about my grandparents. They had a rose garden at the front of the house and gardens at the back, with a greenhouse - so I helped with tomatoes, a veg patch and flower gardens etc