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Nothing breaks in so many pieces as the human heart!



                         December 2015

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Date: 7/17/2018 4:46:00 PM
So very true :(
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Date: 4/19/2018 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful, Keith. Many monokus also belong in the Quotes section. This is one.
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Date: 3/15/2017 2:35:00 PM
I agree with you, Keith; the problem is fixing them together again! But where there is a will.....Regards // paul
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Date: 12/28/2016 12:40:00 PM
True that, Keith...and it's up to us to choose whether to allow the pieces to die, become a stone conglomerate, or melt into pliability and remain a viable sum of its parts...if the pieces can be found... Hug...deb
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Date: 12/23/2016 8:46:00 AM
What becomes of the broken-hearted? Untempered smithereens, and never we find all the pieces back.
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Date: 12/17/2016 9:07:00 PM
HOw the heck did I ever miss THIS one. Awesome succinct delivery of the theme, Keith.
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Date: 9/13/2016 7:17:00 PM
I've often heard this to be true... I've never heard of a monoku before so I'm glad the trail led me here tonight! Learning process never ends. Thank you.
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Date: 8/30/2016 10:49:00 AM
I love this - it's so true. Some shatter more easily than others.
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Date: 8/22/2016 9:45:00 AM
oh so true Keith:-) great one liner:-) hugs Jan xx
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 8/23/2016 7:10:00 PM
Appreciate it, Jan.