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That Period of Life

Orange is more appreciated by the tongue that tastes lime to do so, if not now, when would be the time? Senses and instincts are the same to all gender deaf ears are given to morality sender. So much energy seizes from the heart its license exhibiting any act irrespective of sense. The road to harm and danger is direct to such travels, curiosity stands erect. Every bad move has an allocated score a rotten seed spreads its allergic spore. Hate the rules, damn the instructions utilizing body parts to their full functions. Following the media and not wanting to be left behind slippery rocks and rusting metals placed around the mind. In the room of so much entertainment, bodies lay hoping the pleasure will be long and will stay. Drugs, sex, alcohol and violence all giving this shade time passes, leaving the young heart the need of an aid. Habits learned and adopted to make or to go astray when maturity sinks in, the wise simply walks away

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Date: 11/7/2016 4:57:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem. great work with rhyming the couplets.
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Pankyes Kode
Date: 11/7/2016 4:58:00 PM
Date: 5/3/2016 5:02:00 AM
It is all about growth in life and I believe you have portrayed that very well here! Congrats on POTD
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 11:40:00 AM
I really appreciate your wonderful comments Davey
Date: 5/3/2016 3:17:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, FM. Worth going through it. Cheers, Karma
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Date: 5/9/2016 11:40:00 AM
I really appreciate your wonderful comments Dorji
Date: 5/2/2016 8:40:00 PM
Well said, grats on poem of the day
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 11:40:00 AM
I really appreciate your wonderful comments Nance
Date: 5/2/2016 4:03:00 PM
excellent choice for POTD congrats Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 11:39:00 AM
I really appreciate your wonderful comments Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2016 3:49:00 PM
This write is absolute proof that not only is experience the best teacher but the wise do know when to simply walk away! Congrats on this timely POTD! Thought provoking!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 11:39:00 AM
I really appreciate your wonderful comments Walter Ashe
Date: 5/2/2016 9:39:00 AM
As we learn and experience more we do become more mature and our decisions become wiser. Congrats on the POTD
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/2/2016 11:51:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much
Date: 5/2/2016 8:06:00 AM
Outstanding Funom!! Congratulations on POTD. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/2/2016 11:52:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much
Date: 5/2/2016 7:55:00 AM
Excellent! Congrats!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/2/2016 11:52:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much
Date: 5/2/2016 7:50:00 AM
An excellent choice for POTD! Congratulations!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/2/2016 11:52:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much Richard, its been a long while. I hope you are good
Date: 5/2/2016 7:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Funom ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much
Date: 5/2/2016 6:36:00 AM
Dear Fonum, Congratulations for ur poem being POTD. Well deserving poem for the same. Very nice poem with good literature. Enjoyed........hugs.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much
Date: 5/2/2016 6:20:00 AM
Funom, congratulations for being honored with POTD...
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much
Date: 5/1/2016 1:35:00 PM
Excellently done of so called modern thinking of young state. A learning piece of social philosophy. A great 7. My fav, one my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
I am so grateful for your words... Thank you very much