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Below is the poem entitled Tease which was written by poet Russell Grushco. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Her sting was quite hidden
Under softness of gaze,
Under stature so graceful,
And deep thoughts grasping space.
Stirred the head - but just burned
With a passionate heat.
Like with young little boy
She Insidiously played.
And the hardness of heart
For a moment she lifted
Whith her beautiful eyes
Looking lusciouly gifted.
But it all went to puff
For a thousandth time.
Passion was just aTango
But beyond - do not wonder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Date: 1/7/2017 11:29:00 AM
    The rhymes are a bit weak but the message was pretty clear. Nice offering

    Grushco Avatar Russell Grushco
    Date: 2/1/2017 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sry, just niw daw ur reply. I gladlt would post my Russian original, but when I try to put Cyrillic it all comes as Q signs and squares ((. Find me on FB under Russell Grushco. Post from Jan 7 gas both, Rus n Eng ))
    Seeker Avatar The Seeker
    Date: 1/7/2017 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Would love to see it in Russian
    Grushco Avatar Russell Grushco
    Date: 1/7/2017 6:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. It is a Translation of my Russian poem where rhyme is waaay better. It is quite challenging to translate a poetry and not only relay the meaning but also emotions and even more challenging to make it look like a poem ;)