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Taste My Sweetness

Beyond the words Rhythms of the sea Beyond the doubt Where true love can be Beyond the sky There take my hand Poetic wonder Perfect promise land One single wish Dream I can’t escape Just you and me Two hearts anticipate Breathe me in See romance arise Fall deep into A love that never dies And taste my sweetness Tangle in this bliss Feel our soul’s caress With every tender kiss Linger at my lips Embrace passion’s flame Can’t hide your want When you whisper my name So say it.. say it, Girl Don’t hide your want.. You know I want Come on, come on.. say it Say my name And taste my sweetness Tangle in this bliss Feel our soul’s caress With every tender kiss Linger at my lips Embrace passion’s flame Can’t hide your want When you whisper my name When you whisper my name Whisper my name Please.. whisper my name.......... ~Lyric Man Note: Sometimes a song is in the wind and I am more a secretary than a writer. This is one of those times.

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Date: 11/28/2022 3:53:00 PM
A perfect poem. Contrived by An expert. Thanks for your Poetics. VBR
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Date: 11/12/2018 9:23:00 PM
It’s as though you can see deep into my soul. This romantic song is absolutely wonderful.
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Date: 11/10/2018 7:27:00 PM
Oh yes--I can feel tropical head winds from here. I suspect the difference between romantic and academic genius, is whether breezes lead from the west or east, left or right, outside or inside, up or down.
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Date: 11/10/2018 9:55:00 AM
Hi Dave, such wonderful Lyrical lines I do peruse. You know how to bring the reader into the heart of your song. I feel the emotions shared from your pen. These words so gently caress the heart and they stir the emotions. You are an artist and you paint such wonderful pictures with your words. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/9/2018 8:19:00 AM
Lovely lyric, man:) excellent short lines:)
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Date: 11/8/2018 8:15:00 PM
Love the flow my friend!
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Date: 11/8/2018 2:09:00 PM
Outstanding lyrics my friend, you go from strength to strength and should get these published for real:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:49:00 PM
Outstanding!
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:27:00 PM
Love is. . . a whisper along the wind, touching the heart of the one it is meant for. Your thoughts leave me breathless. This is soft, sultry and beautiful. That tender longing, that ache to be felt, truly melts me. Yes, sometimes a song is a breath away, a moment in the wind. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/6/2018 12:09:00 PM
okay, you made me sigh again, david... a sweet melody from your treasure box!...i was in morocco and just came around now!..huggs
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Date: 11/5/2018 3:25:00 PM
David..What a poem a careless whisper can create...let along a hushing one..I love this ..
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Date: 11/5/2018 1:48:00 PM
Very nice! This is beautifully written :)
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Date: 11/5/2018 12:39:00 PM
Lovely words LM and all the sweeter when they are such a gift! I really enjoyed reading them!
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Date: 11/5/2018 10:02:00 AM
This is really good, don't you just love it when it flows like that, great song Dave.
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Date: 11/5/2018 6:25:00 AM
The song you got from the air is quite sweet and bouncy--lovely rhythm of love..well written, LM.
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Date: 11/5/2018 5:45:00 AM
This is good...Can be put to song...All the Lyric Man
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Date: 11/5/2018 4:22:00 AM
Love these lyrics, xoxoxoxo
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Date: 11/5/2018 3:56:00 AM
Yes, I understand dictation of the muse :) Love the emphasis at the end...the yearning pleading
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Date: 11/5/2018 1:43:00 AM
Lovely romantic lyric Dave, welcome back. Tom.
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Date: 11/5/2018 1:45:00 AM
Thank you, Tom.. I’m thrilled to be off the road for at least a few days!

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