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o there's a twilight magic in the mist it floats between the eventide and dawn attending winds of fancy, heaven-kissed that billow with sweet breaths of Avalon awaiting on a hope 'til gloaming's gone a sea of suns to cast your dreams upon ... o there is an enchantment in the night that dances with dark charm and reverie it holds all yearnings in its bosom, bright and waits for your desires to set them free to plumb the inky depths of midnight sea and loose your sleep's imaginings-to-be ... o there are wonders in the evening air thus brought to full fruition in your sleep all spun to threads of artfulness and care and woven into wishes, grand and deep a tapestry of moonbeams meant to keep the secrets of the twilight in its creep ... and all the souls who tend that great expanse ... will see to your sweet dreaming as they dance! ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Urban Sonnet" Poetry Contest, Laura Loo, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Early February 2018 Premiere" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge % Sponsor. (Line 12, "loose" meaning "to set free")

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Date: 3/4/2018 1:42:00 PM
Hello Gregory,I enjoyed your poem. Your poem made me feel like i was travelling in space. I pictured the stars shining brightly. To me it is a feel good poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:16:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Darlene, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/21/2018 9:38:00 AM
beautifully expressed dear man, loved this poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:33:00 AM
I am honored and humbled by the placement, Luloo, and so pleased you enjoyed it ... thank you so very much, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/20/2018 11:23:00 AM
Lovely piece as usual Gregory, congratulations...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:32:00 AM
Very kind of you, Charlie - thank you kindly! :-)
Date: 2/20/2018 9:29:00 AM
Sill a FAVE with me. Congrats again, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:32:00 AM
Double thanks to you, Line ... blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/20/2018 6:21:00 AM
Excellent, spot-on rhyme; your graphic presentation most unique and effective. Congrats on your win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:31:00 AM
Very kind of you, RAP, and I'm so pleased you appreciated it ... blessings and thanks, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/5/2018 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win with a great poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:24:00 PM
Many kind thank you's, Subimal - blessings, Friend! :-)
Date: 2/4/2018 5:38:00 PM
So lovely! Such a great poet, Greg! Congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:23:00 PM
Oh, that's above-and-beyond, Kim, and so sweet of you ... thank you SO much, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/4/2018 4:55:00 PM
So beautiful is your 'Urban Sonnet', Gregory! Oh, the magic of dreams! Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:23:00 PM
That's so sweet of you to say, Sandra, and it means a lot coming from one of my favorite poets on this site, (seriously). Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/4/2018 1:05:00 PM
Hey!!! Back with heartfelt congrats on a FAVE of mine. Superbly done, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:22:00 PM
Thanks again, Line - so very much appreciated! :-)
Date: 2/4/2018 11:37:00 AM
Your superb sonnet is filled with lines of breathtaking beauty and graceful rhythm and rhyme Gregory. Congratulations on your excellent contest win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:21:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Susan, for your wonderful comment ... I greatly appreciate the kindness you always show me! Blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/3/2018 6:01:00 PM
I can always depend on a few moments of beauty and respite when I choose your poems to read. The picture you chose for this one is perfect.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:20:00 PM
Oh, that's such a nice comment, SW, and it means a lot to me ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/3/2018 12:10:00 PM
Wonderful writing Greg as per usual!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 2/3/2018 9:16:00 AM
Awesome sonnet, Gregory. A FAVE for me.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:19:00 PM
You are far too good to me, Line, and I SO appreciate the kindness! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/3/2018 12:30:00 AM
A magic in your words and the poem's format ... Best wishes, Greg ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, Probir - blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/2/2018 9:54:00 PM
Wonderfully written, Greg! Best of luck to you
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/2/2018 10:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, W2 - greatly appreciated.

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