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Such A Pretty Face

~ Her tumultuous darkness how she longs to be complete in twilight's shrouded silence within, a lost scream for twilight has no mercy giving way to darkened tears where once her life was dulcet bitter pain now lives ~ __________________________ Contest ~ "Dodoitsu Darkness"

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Date: 9/25/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:15:00 PM
Truly magnificent, Rick. Sometimes darkness brings me comfort, but I have walked through the shadows where this sad girl is now. Big congrats on your first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2011 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Rick on a fantastic first place win my friend..with luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 1:32:00 PM
Very poetic work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 4:30:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Rick
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:48:00 PM
such brilliance with this Dodoitsu Darkness poetry Rick my friend.. exceptional lines fascinate luv.. good luck...
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