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Steam of Consciousness

Soul jewels rise with Spring’s arrival of chromatic shawls Waterfalls of the wise arise from crackling crust of earth Rebirth within our beating being where our spirits sway as Ideas boil from our bubbling brains and poetry rains while Our enlightenment stretches forth as galloping sunsets Sentences prance as wild cats and our collective minds Burst into bountiful mountains where we align with moon Every year we gallantly gear into worship, wisdom and the Word Alas, we have the talented task to swim through our soul skins And release regal mastery of internal doctrine and step forward With ivy wrapped dance displaying our relationship trinity As the season rejoices with regaling seeds of spiritual coloration We as the exalted expression of imprinting our self-knowledge Unto future flummox feathers awaiting flight from life itself We transition into first day of Spring itself in every God-like direction February 15th 2019 POTD February 17th 2019 Contest:Old Poems, Free Verse (003) A Poet Destroyer

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Date: 1/20/2021 2:43:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery and expressions ~ so happy to see this charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 11/23/2019 6:24:00 PM
wow, this is VERY good writing, dear Chantelle! wonderful imagery. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/20/2019 3:49:00 PM
Chantelle congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem !
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Date: 3/3/2019 12:36:00 PM
Hello Chantelle Anne Cooke, A beautifully created poem for Spring. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/28/2019 1:14:00 AM
very nice like you
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Date: 2/25/2019 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine piece being awarded POTD!! A fav...
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Date: 2/20/2019 3:16:00 AM
Love your interpretation of the theme Chanetelle and belated congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2019 4:40:00 PM
Chantelle, you did a great job describing the changes we see when spring arrives. There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2019 10:14:00 PM
Certainly a different way to view Spring, and its arrival. Embracing the new. Congratulations Chantelle, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/18/2019 8:11:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Chantelle.
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Date: 2/18/2019 5:09:00 AM
I like this. Was the steam (not the stream) of consciousness intended? Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/18/2019 4:48:00 AM
I admire your faithful heart...Congratulations C P...sometimes it can be difficult to see the sin behind the clouds...
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Date: 2/17/2019 3:41:00 PM
I liked this. Particularly the alliteration and internal rhyming that forces the poem along. Lots in there.
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Date: 2/17/2019 1:12:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Chantelle Anne - Congratulations on yours p.o.d.t. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - (GL in the contest :)
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Date: 2/17/2019 10:27:00 AM
A great poem! An awakening of the spirit with grand images. Love the alliterations. Congratulations!!! A fav.
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Date: 2/17/2019 9:44:00 AM
Beautiful musical sound and imagery. Congratulations, Carolyn, for POTD. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/17/2019 8:43:00 AM
Good diction, good imagery and proper use of pun. Congratulations Chantelle.
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Date: 2/17/2019 8:27:00 AM
Excellent write Chantelle, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 2/17/2019 7:41:00 AM
For it is the fumes of Consciousness that propel us to altered states of being...and thus once we have reached the Matrix of Sacred Geometry...we know we have only just begun lol...Congrats!!! on your POTD!! Chantelle-well deserved my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 2/17/2019 7:54:00 AM
...plus the exploration of Quantum Phenomena & Quantum Spirituality lol...^WW^
Date: 2/17/2019 7:34:00 AM
WOW! Chantelle, this is awesome - great imagery and emotional appeal. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 2/17/2019 7:30:00 AM
Congrats Chantelle on poem of the day.
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Date: 2/17/2019 7:04:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 2/17/2019 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Chantelle! :) xomo
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Date: 2/17/2019 6:22:00 AM
Wonderful, Chantelle. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/17/2019 6:18:00 AM
Congratulation Chantelle...very poetic piece indeed...All the best...
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