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flamed chariot races across bold midnight tomorrow dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 12/10/2022 7:56:00 AM
great senryu with vivid imagery.
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Arlo Parker
Date: 12/10/2022 1:27:00 PM
Your comments always welcome, J... =;o]
Date: 12/4/2022 10:39:00 AM
Love the imagry of the flames against midnight, and 'tomorrow dreams' - so evocative ~
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Arlo Parker
Date: 12/4/2022 7:33:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Miss Michelle. ~:o)