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light in hand you wander through my body lost

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Mat :) - hugs

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/20/2023 7:53:00 AM

i appreciate your reply

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2023 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning Lanterne!! Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/18/2023 8:04:00 PM

my gratitude to you

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 2:25:00 AM

This is really deep and truly intriguing and powerful how you’ve delivered this in few syllables. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/18/2023 8:03:00 PM

thank you for your kindness

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/17/2023 8:52:00 PM

So Nicely Composed. Congrats and. Blessings.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/18/2023 8:04:00 PM

thank you and blessings to you as well

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2023 7:24:00 PM

Very nicely done Mat, Congrats on your win

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:37:00 PM

thank you for taking the time -

Tom Woody

Date: 11/17/2023 6:53:00 AM

Honey I shrunk the kids? Nano lover? In any case, unique

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:59:00 AM

;)

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/16/2023 11:43:00 PM

A profound Lanterne, the lost light metaphor I can relate to, well written Mat

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:59:00 AM

thanks clive for taking the time

Silent One

Date: 11/16/2023 8:42:00 PM

Deep one...with only a few words you said so much

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:59:00 AM

appreciate the visit

Paige Hind

Date: 11/16/2023 6:43:00 PM

I loved this. A type of light...? Either way, it was very beautiful.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/16/2023 7:39:00 PM

thanks paige

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 4:46:00 PM

a unique Lanterne, but I rather like it. If for a contest, best wishes with it. Have a splendid evening, Matt.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/16/2023 7:40:00 PM

to you as well sara