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The Reaper can be bribed…with love
Sizzling scythe sings through spirits simultaneously Once we slip from our faces…where do we embrace? Wings wrap around our souls and we flutter and fly The irony? Death teaches us how to save lives… July 26th 2020 Contest: Four Lines Sponsor: Constance La France First Place

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Date: 7/29/2020 5:14:00 PM
Chantelle, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 8:21:00 AM
Hello Constance! Thank you for your placement in your contest. I'm truly honored. Thank you for the Fav. I'm beyond elated! Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/29/2020 1:34:00 PM
back with my congrats on a very well deserved win, my friend!
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 8:20:00 AM
Hello Andrea! Thank you for your incredible feedback. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/29/2020 11:26:00 AM
Ooh I like that! Congratulations for your top win, xomo!
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 8:17:00 AM
Hello Pigeon Tart! Thank you for your kind commentary. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/28/2020 6:51:00 PM
Well penned, Chantelle. Congrats on your top win.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 7:51:00 AM
Hello Line! Thank you so very much my friend. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/28/2020 2:02:00 PM
a very poignant piece especially in the current circumstances, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 7:48:00 AM
Hello Jan! Thank you for your incredible commentary. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/28/2020 1:19:00 PM
Such honest words Chantelle. Death teaches us so much about life. Congratulations on your win! Much love :)
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 7:44:00 AM
Hello Aditi! Thank you for your outstanding comments. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/28/2020 9:41:00 AM
Such gorgeous poetry, Chantelle. So much in only 4 lines. Your alliteration sings! The thought-provoking irony between death and life, causes and prevention, just beautiful. Well-deserved top win. So glad I was able to read this today. ~ John
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 7:41:00 AM
Hello John! Wow! Thank you for your incredible commentary. I really appreciate it very much. Chantelle hugs
Date: 7/28/2020 9:35:00 AM
Your poem is so relatable Chantelle and so beautifully written. Congratulations on your First Place win! Blessings xxoo
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 7:38:00 AM
Hello Connie! Thank you for your kind commentary. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/28/2020 8:31:00 AM
Congrats Chantelle on your win!
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/30/2020 7:28:00 AM
Hello John! Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2020 8:23:00 AM
Your compelling poem is so timely now as doctors worldwide study the virus and learn more from its victims. I love your use of alliteration, Chantelle. This poem goes to my faves. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/29/2020 10:45:00 AM
Hello Carolyn! Always lovely to hear from you. Wow! A Fave. I'm most grateful and honored. Thank you dear friend. Chantelle hugs
Date: 7/28/2020 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!! Deep. When one has been near death, one can really live. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/29/2020 10:41:00 AM
Hello Paula! Thank you for your breathtaking comments! Enjoy your day too! Chantelle hugs
Date: 7/28/2020 4:32:00 AM
It does teach us how to save lives, now if only more would pay attention. Great thoughts and congratulations on your win, Chantelle.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/29/2020 10:38:00 AM
Hello Jenna! Thank you for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate it very much. Chantelle hugs
Date: 7/28/2020 3:05:00 AM
- Four beautiful lines ... a thought provoker, Chantelle Anne ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/29/2020 10:35:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile! Thank you for your kind commentary. Chantelle hugs
Date: 7/27/2020 5:39:00 AM
I really like this poem. I've read it several times and it spoke a little different each time. I love the wording and how it made me think. Thank you for sharing. Great Poem!
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/27/2020 9:31:00 AM
Hello Mark! I'm blown away by your incredible commentary. I really appreciate it very much! Chantelle hugs
Date: 7/26/2020 10:08:00 PM
Lovely verse Chantelle.. Death teaches us how to save lives… Great entry.. Good luck..
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/27/2020 9:28:00 AM
Hello Jenish! Thank you so very much for your lovely comments. Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/26/2020 8:29:00 PM
wow you took it deep and it's so gorgeous. Mine is done (not posted yet, and not nearly this good)
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/27/2020 9:25:00 AM
Hello Andrea! Wow! Thank you for your incredible feedback. Your poetry blows me away...Chantelle hugs xx
Date: 7/26/2020 6:49:00 PM
This is poetry at its best, Chantelle. It's philosophical, beautiful and has great imagery. You...the mistress with a quill! I see a win coming...woo Hoo! Love you Pangie xx
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/27/2020 9:12:00 AM
Hello Panagiota! Thank you so very much for your incredible commentary! I really appreciate it very much. Love you too dear friend. Chantelle hugs xx Mouse
Date: 7/26/2020 1:34:00 PM
Poignant write Chantelle.
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Chantelle Anne Cooke
Date: 7/26/2020 1:37:00 PM
Hello Jeanne! Thank you for your incredible feedback. Chantelle hugs