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strange ethos, from human darkness and imagination pyre ignite Einstein paradigm metamorphose spills into furious universe etchings on slate, scratch into beautiful madness ~ sacred flowers braided from air into God-induced vision his parable, ghost chamber thought mode experiment inflecting space-time architect apparatus laces inward into form velocity dilation flexing time taffy taut energy mass light expanse quantum opus manifest - ~ even in death his breath still particle wave iambic uproots

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Date: 12/16/2023 10:59:00 AM
This is about Eistein- and your poem about what happened from his mind, right? A metaphysical journey, a pleasure to read!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/16/2023 7:53:00 PM
a nod towards einstein, yes - thank you, paige - always nice to read your thoughts
Date: 12/13/2023 4:42:00 PM
not sure if I'm grasping your poem in its entirety. Is the line 'even in death, his breath still particle wave' a reference to Jesus--the space time architect. If so, this is metaphysically deep. Enjoyed it...have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 12/13/2023 6:33:00 PM
really, a thought fragment about einstein, the transcendence of past deeds reimagined - i like, though, your thought - lack of punctuation aside, i am purposeful in blurring certain boundaries to open the door to multiple possibilities - therein lies the beauty of poetic expression, the mutability, maleability - your insights reaffirm this - deepest gratitude

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