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Cowgirl Riding Horse Silhouette

When your heartbeats drum their message of love. My heart soars like the birds flying above. As flashing thunder streaks across dark skies, I will come swiftly, believe not their lies. If any would stop me, my rage I’ll display. Nothing or no one will stand in my way. True love hath no captor, it must be free. Our hearts and our love are just meant to be. So, hold on to faith and be not dismayed, The last card in this game has not been played. They ceased control because we’re still young, Meet me out back when you hear the bell rung. I’ve bought fast horses, we’ll be on the run, You’ll be real safe, long as I have my gun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/23/2024 6:02:00 AM
Dear Poet Bill. Good Morning. Wowser. You have done yourself in every aspect. I am in awe. Your theme is marvelous and your words reach the reader with sight imagery and emotion because the emotive factor is present and felt. Truly it is. Read back your very entry and words and you will see. It was an honor turning to you page and this particular entry. Have a beautiful morning and day. May it reveal everything good. Love Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)
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Date: 12/17/2023 10:48:00 AM
A sonnet, imbued with tenderness and romance, bearing testament to the depths of affection and unwavering devotion towards Sara, whilst pledging unyielding safeguarding against all adversities. An exquisite symphony of rhythm and rhyme, dearest Bill.
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Date: 12/17/2023 11:28:00 AM
Thanks for the kind comments, my friend. We both appreciate your continuing support. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 12/17/2023 8:10:00 AM
A great poem of cowboy/cowgirl love. It has powerful movement from the beginning statement of love to the ending desperado's determination to save his loved one.
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Date: 12/17/2023 11:30:00 AM
It was fun to write. The ol' west vibe, I guess. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 12/17/2023 8:07:00 AM
A very sweet and romantic sonnet that shows your love and devotion to Sara and how you would protect her against anything.. nice flow and rhymes dear Bill.
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Date: 12/17/2023 11:31:00 AM
Thanks, Silent One, for your continuing support of both Sara and my poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 12/17/2023 3:39:00 AM
how romantic! The perfect story for a novel titled "Cowboy and Cowgirl on the Run." :-) Seriously, your poem speaks of undying love that no man can put asunder. Like you and I, they were meant to be.... I know I'll be safe with us riding together in the sunset, hugs, me
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Date: 12/17/2023 11:34:00 AM
Long as I got, "little Nellie", not even a gunslinger's gonna bother you, sweet Sara. Hugs, Bill

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