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             Red 
            is the
            wine
          on your 
      soft kissed lips,
           the fire
               in
         your eyes,
       the lifeblood
that warms your touch,
      the dress that
         clings your
             flesh,
          and glow
         of burning
           coals in 
              the 
           heat of 
              us!

            -------



         July 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2015 10:30:00 PM
Keith.. Such a lovely winning Waltz.. Sincere congrats!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/26/2015 11:06:00 PM
Cheers LM. I don't normally write in this vein but what the hell!
Date: 7/22/2015 11:58:00 PM
Keith, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/26/2015 11:07:00 PM
Cheers!
Date: 7/20/2015 4:26:00 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/20/2015 6:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara. Glad you liked it.
Date: 7/20/2015 3:39:00 PM
wowowow, I think my favorite so far. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/20/2015 6:43:00 PM
Thanks Andrea - I do value your comments. Take care.
Date: 7/19/2015 3:25:00 PM
AWESOME
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/20/2015 4:38:00 AM
God bless!
Date: 7/19/2015 1:20:00 PM
This is so romantically hot! Red lips, red wine, red heart...love it, my friend! Congratualtions on a beautiful win! It's a 7! Pandita
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/20/2015 4:38:00 AM
Pandita, you can comment anytime! God bless and thanks for reading.
Date: 7/19/2015 5:15:00 AM
a passionate piece many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I do like red.
Date: 7/19/2015 1:35:00 AM
Beautiful write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Appreciate it.
Date: 7/18/2015 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win keith!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Lee.
Date: 7/18/2015 11:21:00 PM
A wonderfully romantic waltz wave with a smooth flow to it! Keith, congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2015 3:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim. I do enjoy your contests.
Date: 7/13/2015 4:00:00 PM
yes, you brought forth very well the PASSION that is RED!!
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Date: 7/9/2015 10:25:00 PM
Oh wow! I love this! I chose red too...but haven't posted yet...Good luck, Keith!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/9/2015 10:38:00 PM
Great minds think alike. Can't wait to read it Kim. Unleash your red Kraken!
Date: 7/6/2015 3:11:00 AM
ohh, sizzling images burst through your words, keith... well done!.. huggs
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/6/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Nette. I had to take a cold shower after I wrote this!