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Playing about with a poem

Cherry blossomed silk worms Rhubarb coated dragons Vanilla essence toadstool Strawberry tartlet possums Cinnamon coated caterpillars Honey drenched bees Raisin filled butterfly’s Chocolate candied trees Marshmallow bouncing slugs Caramel dripped leaves Icecream frozen snails Yogurt runny fleas Silly mix of words Just felt like doing this Doesn’t make much sense But fun to flip with it

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Date: 1/17/2022 8:14:00 AM
An enjoyable verse Deb, let your fingers do the writing, Poetry isn't all about Shakespeare, some goes right over my head. Keep it simple I say. Tom
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/17/2022 4:10:00 PM
You are very much allowed Tom, but only because it’s you....haha :) :) x
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/17/2022 2:00:00 PM
Lol, my bad, I'd just read one of her poems senior moment, im allowed.
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/17/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Tom, yes I’m inclined to agree!..... Angie (though you can call me Deb) :) :) x
Date: 1/16/2022 11:43:00 PM
That’s fun Angie and you know who would absolutely love it….? You know! Hehe…..Debx
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/17/2022 4:12:00 AM
Haha! Indeed I do Miss Debs :) xxx
Date: 1/16/2022 4:48:00 PM
Indeed! I spend an incredible amount of time playing around with words. I think it might be a universal characteristic of those of us who possess a poetic mind, Angela. I liked your poem--sense and nonsense!
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Angela Tune
Date: 1/16/2022 4:53:00 PM
Haha! Yes I think your right there, it’s fun isn’t it! Thanks for your lovely comment, I nearly deleted it as thought it was daft. Glad I didn’t :) :)