Picnic

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A gurgling brook Surrounded by large oak trees Flowers everywhere And a blanket for the ground Best picnic place ever found!

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 8:41:00 AM

well said...the place you describe is scenic and soothing...lets do that sometime! :-) smiles

Bill Baker
Date: 12/22/2023 6:30:00 PM

I wish would slow down enough to, but I don't see it in our near future. Hugs, Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2023 8:32:00 PM

Nothing beats being at one with nature Bill. Reminded me of a lovely picnic we had once at Yosemite by the Merced river with the half dome in the background. It was heaven. Tom

Bill Baker
Date: 12/21/2023 9:25:00 PM

WOW, that a great picnic spot! I miss traveling around for holidays. We quit flying during Covid and haven't taken a holiday for 3 years now. I need one. Good to see you back strong (no pun intended), my friend. Bill