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Parallel universes

Walls crooked, twisted Like an old man's spine Decades off-kilter Here I don't exist I am absent from my life I haunt this hotel The rust and Sharp smells Entombed in London's bowels Fill me with horror Moments stick like gIue In an endless déjà vu In this twilight zone

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Date: 4/16/2018 1:34:00 PM
Haunting beauty Zara!
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Date: 1/3/2018 2:04:00 AM
Brilliant! Hi Zara. Its no haiku though. Im off to read some more.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/3/2018 11:18:00 PM
Sorry, it is Haiku. What do I know about.forms