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Can you guess the song
Won't you dance? the band can play, our secret song, so please come on, a little bit closer, hear every word, they have to say, before it's all over, the harvest moon, will make her way, for another sun, to take her place, night’s orchestra, holds us in stead, watching stars, sway overhead.

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Date: 2/21/2024 12:30:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done
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Date: 2/17/2024 7:43:00 AM
Wonderful depiction of a beautiful moment shared between two people, Kate.
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Date: 2/17/2024 4:30:00 AM
Dear Kate, Your poem is absolutely captivating! The way you knit together the invitation to dance, the hidden meaning of a shared song, and the evocative imagery of the harvest moon paints a truly breathtaking scene. It feels like stepping into a timeless moment, filled with a bittersweet longing and unspoken intimacy. Your poem is a delight to read and ponder, and it has sparked my curiosity about this mysterious song. If you're ever willing to reveal its identity, I'd be thrilled to hear it! - Blessings Daniel
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Kate Davies
Date: 2/18/2024 3:08:00 AM
Hi Daniel thank you for the lovely feedback. The song is actually written in the poem, harvest moon by Neil young

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