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Onset of puberty

ONSET OF PUBERTY

Strong became the want to see female flesh,
an unclothed figure for a hand to rest,
with fingers to feel and further refresh,
and touch the softness of a firm breast.
The soft fair skin of a wholesome bosom,
the jutting excitement of a nipple
like a rosy-pink flower in blossom,
to enhance the lust though not as ample.
Childhood games changed to teenage desire,
as began the young boys change to manhood.
So too began a young heart to acquire
more meaning, depth for which love’s sharing stood.

A search began to find true love to share,
lovingness, of feelings beyond compare.



T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/3/2017 6:16:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet that shows the progression from fleshly urges to the ultimate love of a woman. Lovely imagery!
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Teppo Gren
Date: 3/3/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. T.J
Date: 6/15/2016 3:39:00 PM
this is really cool, Teppo . A beautiful description of the budding breasts!!
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Teppo Gren
Date: 7/3/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I truly appreciate you reading my sonnets. T.J
Date: 4/8/2016 11:02:00 PM
This was so well done, Teppo! It's not often, I find, that a sonnet transitions like that, and it became something much more profound in the end: the lust of the outer-shell, but a reflection of the inner. Your language was very seductive and visual ... excellent pen!
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Teppo Gren
Date: 4/10/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tim, for your positive comments and for reading my earlier posts. T.J
Date: 2/15/2016 11:48:00 AM
Hi T.J.my friend. A sensual sonnet that can easily sing into my dreams and i can live its visions. Well T.J. another winner as far as i am concerned. A true romantic writes of the first changing of feelings from childhood to manhood. As always, your work has that gentle flow that i believe a Sonnet really needs. Once more your imagery does flow into the mind. Such a wonderful write T.J. It has to be a seven and a fave....Vlad.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 2/16/2016 3:53:00 AM
Once again I convey my sincere thanks for your kind comments, a seven and fave. T.J