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Style Pedro's Nine Liner

On This Morning

All of nature is sweet
As each morning I greet
Golden sun that does shine
Each dawn it is so fine
 The Olive trees glow in the sunlight
As the morning wakes up from the night
It makes me feel high
I cannot deny
How these mornings they’re filled with delight 

I am up from my bed
Clearing dust from my head
Then I just meditate
This makes me feel so great
I cast thoughts away, and just watch me
Get lost in all my sweet mystery
Oh how I love this
It gives me such bliss
In these mornings so content I be

22 November 2015


 
Pedro’s Nine-Liner--- Created by Peter Duggan 11/22/15
Stanzas two for style book to look nice on page..
Rhyme is aaccccddc
Meter is 6,6,6,6,9,9,5,5,9
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Date: 1/12/2019 11:35:00 AM
Great poem my friend, such a postive side to it.. Great images as always..
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Date: 1/12/2019 4:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent, always a pleasure to trad your kind comments, my friend...Peter
Date: 1/11/2019 11:16:00 PM
Peter, I envision you outside every single morning, pup by your side, watching the sunrise. Possibly drinking coffee, and enjoying every sound, movement and color.
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Date: 1/12/2019 4:45:00 PM
Hi Caren, I guess that is about it, my friend, I adore the early mornings. Have a great day, my friend...Peter
Date: 1/11/2019 8:18:00 PM
Peter, I love the rhythm that dances with delight through your lovely and uplifting verses of appreciation for the golden morn and for the beauty of nature. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/11/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan. So glad you liked my poem, my friend. It is not for a contest, my friend. I have not entered one for about five years, I am far from being competitive. I thank you sincerely for your kind comments... I hope your days are very happy.....Peter
Date: 1/11/2019 7:49:00 PM
very sweet rhyme, sidney. I like this form of Peter Duggan's.
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/11/2019 8:22:00 PM
hi Andrea I write these styles but I can never be satisfied with them. I much prefer my usual Flowing, rhyming style. I am so glad you like it though. Your kind words are always a delight for me. Thank you so much....peter
Date: 1/11/2019 7:20:00 PM
So nice to hear about your beautiful, peaceful mornings you write so well about. Thanks for sharing Peter :)
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:19:00 PM
Hi Heidi, there is nothing better than a peaceful morning. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend....peter