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long tree limbs stretching over gurgling brook flowing minnows are dashing I sit on the bank observing nature’s beauty a calming moment

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/12/2024 12:19:00 PM

Dear Bill. Hi. I love the title to which you did not stray. This is why I believe there is so much anger chaos and destruction within people and the world. We as people do not take the time to connect with nature and spend time in harmony and peace which is so important for our souls and well being. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. It was a treat turning to your page today. Have a wonderful night and weekend. Love Peace and Blessings always to you and Sara. (smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 1/12/2024 5:46:00 PM

I'm glad you were able to sit by the gurgling brook today. at least in your mind, my dear friend. Poetry can take us to the most charming places at times. Enjoy your evening, Hugs, Bill

Charles Messina

Date: 12/12/2023 5:29:00 PM

Very nice, senryu, Bill. Being the fisherman I am, I just wish they were trout instead of minnows (lol) Have a great week. Charlie

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 6:09:00 PM

Yep, trout are a lot more fun than them little guys. Happy Trails, my friend. Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/12/2023 4:06:00 PM

Nature is always speaking Bill, always there trying to tell us every step we shoud take. If you listen to nature, you always have the right answer. Bright poem as bright is the heart that wrote it. Thanksxxx

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 6:11:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poet, Maria, and for the kind things you say about me, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Hugs, Bill

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/12/2023 3:16:00 PM

There’s nothing like nature for calming the blues. A soothing Senryu Bill… Belle

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 3:38:00 PM

Glad you like it Belle. Thanks for the visit, my friend. Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 12/12/2023 10:50:00 AM

Nice senryu, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Jay. Have a nice day, my friend. Bill

Silent One

Date: 12/12/2023 10:20:00 AM

Two wonderful haiku and that is what they are about.. writing about what you see and nature.. isnt it such an inspirational thing with so much beauty around us... no matter where you are in there world, there will always be some form of beauty that surrounds.. and you have captured that perfectly..

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 3:40:00 PM

I agree, Silent One, there's beauty everywhere if we mindfully look for it in all things, we will find it. Sometimes it's hard to get past the ugly though. Thanks for the visits and comments, my friend. Cheers! Bill

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/12/2023 7:13:00 AM

a wonder, a moment of grace reading this poem, nature grace, Thanks poet Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 7:43:00 AM

You're welcome, Yann. Thanks for the comment. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 12/12/2023 6:49:00 AM

Sounds perfect Bill! Natures scenery and sounds are the best medicine. Enjoy your day my friend :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 7:44:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Anne. The sounds of nature are comforting, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 6:04:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous. I love the way you’ve written in such a creative and artistic manner. Especially “ long tree limbs stretching over gurgling brook flowing“ so stunning. And has a soft flow to your words too. Its always calming to connect with nature take a minute to appreciate Gods creation. Pleasure reading this senryu. Because of the imagery in first one I felt like i was reading a haiku so good. Sending you and Sara light always

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 7:45:00 AM

Thank you for the gracious comments and the Light, my friend. Have a peaceful day. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/12/2023 2:58:00 AM

beautiful and captivating imagery, Bill. I loved 'gurgling brook.' Reminds me of my childhood days when I'd grab my book and head for nearby Duck Creek where I'd sit on the bank observing nature and reading my book. A different time when it was safe for a young girl to disappear for hours with no parental concern. It was my childhoodhappy place. A tremendously touching write, dear hubby. thank you!!

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 7:47:00 AM

Those days have passed away, Sara. I'm glad we got to experience freedom and safety during our childhoods. Thanks for the lovely kind words, my best friend. Love and hugs, Bill

Judy Ball

Date: 12/12/2023 1:22:00 AM

This reminds me of my youth in Florida when I would lie on my stomach for hours watching the minnows flit back and forth in the river not far from our house. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 7:48:00 AM

Florida is a beautiful state, Judy. I'm glad you have pleasant memories of your childhood there. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/12/2023 1:12:00 AM

A beautiful scene, both in picture and words.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/12/2023 7:38:00 AM

Thank you for commenting on my poetry, Hilda. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/11/2023 9:02:00 PM

No better place to be Bill, it clears the mind and soothes the soul. Tom

Bill Baker
Date: 12/11/2023 9:10:00 PM

I agree, Tom. Sitting in nature at peace is soulful and healing. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/11/2023 7:29:00 PM

Dear Bill, I feel your appreciation and gratitude for Nature. Your Senryu are lovely. I was especially struck by "minnows are dashing" - lively imagery contrasting nicely with "I sit on the bank". Splendid serenity my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Bill Baker
Date: 12/11/2023 9:09:00 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful comments, Susan. I enjoyed writing this one and "I AM RAIN" today. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/11/2023 7:03:00 PM

Sometimes, the stillness of moments gives us time to reflect upon ourselves and be insightful of our conscience.. Quality-time with one's own self is truly necessary.. The serenity that you've described here is absolutely whimsical and mesmerizing.. Love this Senryu poem, dear Bill! A FAV for me :)

Bill Baker
Date: 12/11/2023 8:59:00 PM

Thank you for the visit and mindful comments and the FAV, Hiya. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill