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I am not sad, just restless and reckless, But twenty, and still chasing happiness, Believing on the blue world, and their fears, In reality, the world is shy on giving love. I am not sad, just restless and reckless. Young, stupid, surely chasing happiness, Trying to find reason why I am here, And I'm fulfilling dreams that are hard to reach above.

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Date: 7/2/2019 8:17:00 AM
You may be young and restless but I would be surprised if anyone who truly knows you would describe you as stupid.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 7/3/2019 7:21:00 AM
Oh my! :)))) Thank you for this comment! I still think I'm a very stupid kid! :)
Date: 6/11/2019 7:48:00 AM
A fine write Vincent, good rhyme and flow with fine imagery too!
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/11/2019 9:44:00 PM
Hey there! Thank you so much!
Date: 5/27/2019 11:17:00 PM
G'day Vincent … comes across to me as a lyric and a pretty good one too - thank you Vincent - Lindsay
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/3/2019 9:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Date: 5/25/2019 7:38:00 AM
Good luck my friend...to each his own...It's not easy...a thought provoking write...
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/3/2019 9:47:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Date: 5/24/2019 8:47:00 AM
I believe you are fulfilling dreams, and educating others who have no idea at all how to do it.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/3/2019 9:46:00 PM
Trying to fulfill is more fitting! Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Date: 5/24/2019 5:29:00 AM
You sound like you know what you want, just no how to get it, as the years amass you will I' m sure, Anyone who can write like this, has a pretty good idea where he is going, have a good day, (smiley)
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/3/2019 9:45:00 PM
Hey thank you for commenting and reading my work! :)))
Date: 5/24/2019 1:36:00 AM
Hey, I love you and old enough to be your granny.))) Happiness is so elusive. It does not arrive and stay. Choose each moment, embrace it fully.Good job. Dance around the room that you are still 20! That's perfectly glorious. Read e.e. Cummings.you may like him. Panagiota
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/24/2019 1:39:00 AM
Hey thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Date: 5/21/2019 9:38:00 PM
Never give up on achieving happiness, it is something that we all deserve to have in life... I enjoyed reading such an expressive piece of poetry this evening. Keep up the great work Vincent!
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/21/2019 11:43:00 PM
Hey thank you for reading and giving a comment! :)
Date: 5/21/2019 9:36:00 AM
A very thought-provoking write, Vincent, especially "fulfilling dreams that are hard to reach above." Cheers! Welcome to the Soup! ~Mark
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/21/2019 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)))
Date: 5/21/2019 7:53:00 AM
Well written and expressed :)
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/21/2019 9:59:00 AM
Hey there! Thank you for commenting!
Date: 5/21/2019 7:16:00 AM
Thoughts of a young mind..most can relate to.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/21/2019 9:58:00 AM
Well, I have to speak for my generation. Haha. Thanks for commenting! :)
Date: 5/21/2019 7:11:00 AM
Great insightful honest write.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/21/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)