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Nightmare

“frenzy fever morbid murmur - nightmare veer entwine” (by poet) dark eye of light, arc entangle in deepest memory nightmare born upon writhing fever careen down crooked spine warp and spiral dream though, no outward illness cerebral measure mad mask hollow glimpse the sick within to gears grinding slow engage in burning skull, snap catching wayward whispers indulge heavy horror, whips …and slips through pale landscapes mute like a child with a pack of matches

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Date: 11/26/2023 11:21:00 PM
"like a child with a pack of matches" - a beautiful smile. Congratulations!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/27/2023 6:55:00 AM
thank you for reading
Date: 11/24/2023 5:54:00 PM
Heavy, and scary... the whole poem reads madness...and memory... in a child. Enjoyed.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/24/2023 9:00:00 PM
thank you for the time, paige
Date: 11/23/2023 7:05:00 AM
Sharp, precise words to catch the nightmare terror. Your final simile emphasizes the troubling risk of it all. Congratulations! Brian
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/23/2023 8:31:00 AM
appreciate the response -
Date: 11/22/2023 10:08:00 PM
From mad mask hollow glimpse, I was getting chills, and nothing in this world more dangerous than a child with matches. Creepy poem, Well done.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/23/2023 6:20:00 AM
My gratitude
Date: 11/22/2023 11:21:00 AM
Great word choices to set the scene of a nightmare indeed
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/22/2023 11:50:00 AM
thanks, clive
Date: 11/22/2023 10:30:00 AM
Can feel the horror in your words.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/22/2023 10:33:00 AM
thank you for visiting

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