Narrowing

how my temple aches a pain I can almost see though blind to the cause

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John Lawless

Date: 8/25/2023 2:05:00 PM

OUCH!!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/25/2023 2:19:00 PM

I know, fancy having to write about it for a bit of sympathy too :D

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/25/2023 1:52:00 PM

A wonderful observation here Dilly, the reader too can try explore the cause, but will not see it either, this one just means what it says, and says what it means, brilliant, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/25/2023 1:58:00 PM

It is indeed just a straight forward observation, it's become a pain in the neck now though - I'm not exactly blind to the cause (old RTA) but musing on it still. Just trying 2 paracetamol and a cup of tea to shift it