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My Daughter at 17

Goes with the trend bravely but with half sight ripe sexuality, her massive headlight following growth so damp every act gives a cramp scaling through with my ancient words, she might.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/26/2017 10:38:00 AM
Dear Funom: A nice take here. Leon
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Leon
Date: 7/27/2017 3:56:00 AM
I am sure you are very protective of your daughter Funom i hope she heeds your advice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2017 9:08:00 AM
I hope so too Allison.Thank you very much
Date: 7/26/2017 12:29:00 PM
Funom, I have a daughter also. I understand your poem's pain.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2017 9:08:00 AM
Wow! Great.. it's usually not easy but God will see us through in Jesus name. Amen!
Date: 7/26/2017 12:29:00 PM
She has to be brave...she has a father for a poet ;) After kids leave the nest a whole new ballgame...enjoy. Blessings!
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Date: 7/29/2017 9:08:00 AM
Yes Kim, thank you so much