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the intricacies of losing myself are plentiful as well as beautiful any background can take over but not affect the wall may grimace and disapprove I'm elsewhere, in my moment may never return I won't look stone in the eye have it tell me how to exist we both fade my time short pain of existence ~ too real let me be lost forget criticism select only the song I play within the limitations of my forever let mind and body be absorbed establish a sense of incorruptible self I'll keep my head down unsee the wall, the world for I'm made of nothing shortly to disperse into more nothing I'll outright refuse to be any something set by a fixed expression imposed upon me I'll be tangibly nothing disappear like all music is prone to do

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Date: 11/16/2024 4:47:00 PM
Her posture, poise, and delicacy really depict her reality, to acknowledge her for more than just any something, she'll show the world. A forever song will dissipate. Music can be an acquired experience. I felt mingled with compassion and bewilderment in this one, DD. (I had a Zumba class today! Still going)?
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Date: 11/18/2024 2:25:00 PM
Did Box Fit followed by Zumba - I felt it haha
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Date: 11/17/2024 9:18:00 AM
Excellent! It's always been a part of me, there is always a class to take, It keeps a smile on my face.
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Date: 11/17/2024 3:55:00 AM
Hi Anaya, there is a lot to ponder when it comes to what lingers and what dissipates. I did do Zumba last week but am just on the waiting list for tomorrow, so might switch out for boxercise - or crazily do a back to back if I get a space :)
Date: 11/16/2024 8:09:00 AM
Hi Dilly your poem is music to my ears, I can only write short poems now days, if you can call them poems lol, have a lovely weekend. Xx
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:45:00 AM
My biggest discovery John was that I can call whatever I like a poem! Revelation. Ekphrasis is just writing about some art - no other rules.
Date: 11/16/2024 7:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. What a picture you have here. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Paula x

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